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Given 2013-01-15
The Nature of Lungs by *schongslipper has an exceptionally executed structure to complement the content of the poem. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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SakuraDreamerz2 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
This is amazing!
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schongslipper Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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SakuraDreamerz2 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
You're welcome!
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Skylanth Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wonderful! Love the structure.
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schongslipper Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I tried to pull it off without having that one word a line thing going. I hope I achieved that...
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Skylanth Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think so! It really has the rhythm of a deep inhale and exhale.
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schongslipper Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks =]
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restlessreverie Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
congrats on the DD~^^ great piece!
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schongslipper Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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rockerjase Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
This could be about all the useless crap in people's lives (including my own) and how humans always want more and more as if it will make them feel more satisfied, but in reality we would best off getting away from all these petty distractions that clog up our lives. I don't know though, I didn't write the poem... :/
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